BedsheetWalking's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Genderbent Kumo]

It all looks very good until below his belly button, and for the life of me I cant see his lower abdominal muscle as anything else but a wiener.

You draw alot of ladies, and that is a common problem when swapping from women to men, my only advice is to try these two sites so you can get more familiar with drawing men from the waist down.

https://figurosity.com/ an online site with real and CG models

https://doll-a.net/terawell/ a downloadable app for the pc that lets you customize your model

Good luck!

Killicillin responds:

This is true! Men are difficult for me, (particularly where you pointed out: below the waist) so I don't draw them as often, but I'll give these sites a try since I really do want to draw more men. Thank you!!

[marniecute]

Wow, face reminds me of kawacy a little bit but the rest of her is so rendered

[Reading]

Wow! I like how you've made her skin seem almost squishy. Nice attention to detail on her shirt tan.

The contrast in this picture is super high from her brown and red tones alllllll the way to the opposite side of the spectrum with the green. Makes your logo kinda hard to read.

I want to look at her face longer but the contrast and the busyness make the resting spot her butt / lower back (which if it was your intention: AWESOME) which is a bummer because you did such a great job on her face

[2D Minimal Landscape]

Nifty, I like that use of
NEAR -> FAR
Darker -> Lighter (but the effect seems broken on the mountain, feels like an after thought next to that nice rendered sky and detailed trees)

But that mountain seems so bland in the distance. The composition makes me really want to look at that mountain but the trees seem much more interesting and full of detail.

Bob Ross likes to paint mountains, maybe you could benefit from watching one of his paint jobs on youtube? .w.

Dumbagon responds:

Thanks, I’ll give it some thought :)

[Commission - Her Throne]

Wow! This art style would feel right at home with drawing some of my favorite characters.

This piece is composed really well, the only thing that might need changing is where their eyes lead.

The brown and red girl looks relaxed but staring off into the distance
The cow girls eyes are a tad off as to what shes looking at (her left pupil doesn't seem to track where the right one does) but she seems to be looking at the viewer with maybe some shock?

Looking at their faces its kinda hard to tell the dynamic between the two. Maybe if they were looking at each other, looking at the same thing, or if one was focused on something with intent?

Cavitees responds:

Thanks for the nice words! <3

The cowgirl was bimbofied- so her gaze is into a foggy bliss

[commission]

I like the face here, good work on it!
I feel the body might be just the wee tiniest bit off though, perhaps his neck is a teensie bit small? It's so close to being perfect though!