BedsheetWalking's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[09272021 Vas]

WoOoOoOoOoW

lizbeth490021 responds:

thank you so much, I'm really glad you enjoy my work.

[Inktober Day 3]

Yes yes yes yesssss.

very nice, much floof, I like how it feels like a 100% complete image, there is not a thing technically wrong with this! Well done!

MoonBunny responds:

Oh gosh thank you so very much!! <3

[COMMISSION: Vampire Fursona]

You'd benefit from using vectors in your art or upping your dpi if you can

Cubesona responds:

I'm unsure what you mean.

[groovy skeleton pointillism thing]

This is perfect aside from

im not sure whats going on with the hand on the left

and this neat effect with the lighting would look even better if the background was darker and receiving light from the flower vs having your character in a lit room aswell

NolanBurgs responds:

Thanks for the tip! I'll work on that next time I try something like this!

[Winter 2019 Fanart Contest]

Wow! Look at her hair technique

This seems perfect! Feels like a 100% complete piece with lots of life inside it.

Only thing I can think of, and this is suuuuper nitpicky: the trees seems to have a bit too much attention on them for it to be a "dont look at it" thing, and not enough attention (the ones closest upfront) to look like it belongs in the image at the size that they are. They seem relatively close to the girl, and not far away enough to be that blurry

PEIGI1045 responds:

Yeah, I guess you're right. I'm not so good at backgrounds so it was something new for me to try
;-;

[JVDragoon]

What a cute booper snooper (nose)!

This piece feels so close to being something really great,

if I had to guess what it needed would be just a tiny bit more contrast on where ever the viewers eyes are supposed to look at first. (I think in this case it's the eyes /face? Id try just a little tiny bit of luminary layer tinted ... hmm not yellow but purhaps cyan, and just fade it over a tiny bit. not too much, but juuuust enough to bring it forward some :)

To preserve this lovely softness you have, and also really put the final touch on. just my thoughts, you might come up with something else.

UltraBondageFairy responds:

Thanks a lot for the suggestions! I added the blur/softness by duplicating the lines layer, blurring it, and then putting it under the original. Just erasing the blur layer from the eyes will go a long way in bringing the attention in~

[Genderbent Kumo]

It all looks very good until below his belly button, and for the life of me I cant see his lower abdominal muscle as anything else but a wiener.

You draw alot of ladies, and that is a common problem when swapping from women to men, my only advice is to try these two sites so you can get more familiar with drawing men from the waist down.

https://figurosity.com/ an online site with real and CG models

https://doll-a.net/terawell/ a downloadable app for the pc that lets you customize your model

Good luck!

Killicillin responds:

This is true! Men are difficult for me, (particularly where you pointed out: below the waist) so I don't draw them as often, but I'll give these sites a try since I really do want to draw more men. Thank you!!

[2D Minimal Landscape]

Nifty, I like that use of
NEAR -> FAR
Darker -> Lighter (but the effect seems broken on the mountain, feels like an after thought next to that nice rendered sky and detailed trees)

But that mountain seems so bland in the distance. The composition makes me really want to look at that mountain but the trees seem much more interesting and full of detail.

Bob Ross likes to paint mountains, maybe you could benefit from watching one of his paint jobs on youtube? .w.

Dumbagon responds:

Thanks, I’ll give it some thought :)

[Commission - Her Throne]

Wow! This art style would feel right at home with drawing some of my favorite characters.

This piece is composed really well, the only thing that might need changing is where their eyes lead.

The brown and red girl looks relaxed but staring off into the distance
The cow girls eyes are a tad off as to what shes looking at (her left pupil doesn't seem to track where the right one does) but she seems to be looking at the viewer with maybe some shock?

Looking at their faces its kinda hard to tell the dynamic between the two. Maybe if they were looking at each other, looking at the same thing, or if one was focused on something with intent?

Cavitees responds:

Thanks for the nice words! <3

The cowgirl was bimbofied- so her gaze is into a foggy bliss